JEDI MIND TRICKS!!~~

I'm playing with your mind; slaying the benign//
AK-47 up your spine; succulent dimes on my dice//
I kill sabertooth tigers with succulent sharp swords//
BUCK HORDES; suck whores breast milk; the blessed ELK//
I'm the nanosecond writer; brandish typer//
CANDOR RHYMER; breaking records like broken records//
I'm the maximum sentence; you're doing mininum damage//
BUSY WITH TANGENTS; the beginning of ballads//
I'm the offspring of WAR; bucking hordes//
FUCKING BORE/BOAR like HUNTING//

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Originally Posted by Sinacog

breaking records like broken records

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Bro ngl I fuck with that line. That’s actually kinda fire.

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Originally Posted by Sinacog

BUCK HORDES; suck whores breast milk; the blessed ELK

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Uh pardon? What does this mean? Is this visionary poetry, is it gibberish, is it both? Mankind may never know.

It’s unusual for sure, I can’t say I understand it enough to like it per se, but I appreciate that you’re trying something different rather than just imitating others. Seems expressive, I’m just not sure what it’s expressing.