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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Smog
@Exalted.
Yep
OK.
Smog's good to go. He sent his bar in.
When I first seen ur name I thought genius, brilliant, the type I would quote
But like light travelin faster than sound… u fuckin appeared bright till u spoke
This bum is so shitty, get lit up when I run thru you swiftly
Now Smog gets a halo cuz his bars so Light Polluting RB like an industrial city
Both did "light" punches but I feel like Smog's was smoother.
So. This one’s tough to vote on. I liked exalted concept way more but the wording was choppy
Smog had solid wording but I wasn’t feeling the concept this week. Close call
v/ exalted
—Lenox vote
Wasn't a fan of exalted this week. Concept had potential but could have benefit from some rewording
Smog was simple but effective and did enough to take the dub
v/smog
Vote smog
Didn’t like the so light polluting , get what you were going for but that read funny
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Smog had an ok concept , just a little better ..
This was close.. I thought both were chill..I’ve read them
Over n over 5 times now..still not sure which I liked better..I guess I gotta give it to smog for the smoother hit..
The light flip wasn’t that creative from ex… but also smogs wasn’t all that.. I’m still struggling to pick a winner but
Smog got it
I didn't mind either of them. One thing I've noticed about Exalted is he gets really smart about his bars, they are thoughtful and fleshed out, there is complexity amalgamated with simplicity, and like he did here, he allowed his creativity to breathe. Smog's bar was more direct with a harsh pay off. Unlike Exalted, he puts minimal effort into his concepts and gets straight to the point without losing any ground. Good battle.
v-Smog
5-1 Smog wins