Season Finals: Phalanx 14-1 vs Greedy 5-0 (Phalanx wins.)

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S E A S O N . F I N A L S

Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Greedy

I might pull up to college. Aint no hoop dreams
What I'm tripping on? Balenciaga shoe strings...
I might pull up on ur block. This the end games
Its heavy metal rock when I switch lanes
-rip Drakeo the Ruler

@Greedy

Tell this candy ass dude to stop. Or get a doomed result. Let the rueger talk
If I open up/chute? Ya dropped. This Greedy bitch going down like Veruca Salt

My Cruz gonna stockin' stuff him in a Hyundai..burn it, then let it crash violently
I'm not Santa, Pha' but its an early Christmas for the cops when they find one stashed by a tree

Vote - Greedy. Phal cool lunch I like The set up not much sting tho
Greedy landed nicely with the name flip and punch I think was executed nicely cool battle fellas.

Phalanx - Flow was nice, it built the momentum for the ending nameplay well. The punch hits but it's not personal or clever enough to be a haymaker, would probably be more suited to a flex verse kinda situation.

Greedy - Wording throughout made the flow real choppy, you used a 4 syllable multi but it took too long to get there.. Take out some of the filler like below. The nameplay felt a bit forced, I didn't think it really got at him from a fresh hard hitting angle.

My Cruz gonna stockin' stuff him in a whip.. then let it crash violently

I thought Phalanx was the more polished overall

Very close but I thought phal was a smoother read. Not the best champ match I've seen. Decent punches but kinda lackluster for champ match

v-phal

Vote Phal for me here..Greedy was a bit more wordy to read than Phal and didn't feel like it stung as much. Good Willy Wonka flip from Phalanx. Both concepts were good but I feel like Phal just connected more in general.

wasn't a big fan of either. Greedy was overly wordy for me, the rhyme was awesome but it could use some cleaner execution. Phalanx was good with the nameplay reference but also feel his execution was a bit off. np vs santa cruz I'm leaning for the np.. v/phalanx

congrats both

Vote: Phalanx

Thought his was a little more aggressive. Wasn't one of his better punchlines I've seen but Greedy while I did like where he went concept wise, just the wording and the choppyness messed him up here. Had it been worded smoother it woulda hit harder which coulda been the difference here.

I feel like both were a little underwhelming compared to what you’ve both dropped throughout the season. Very similar punches to me in terms of them being a bit wordy and the wordplay being a little forced impacting the sting output of the punches. In the end I think greedys punch was just slightly better but also slightly more wordy. I also think greedys concept was a little better than a Willy wonder one. Close battle had to re read 3 times to conclude a winner

V/greedy

Phalanx wins 5-1.