Originally Posted by
Ctrl Alt Elite
she's faithful and my heart has no vacancy
I've no patience, see - I want her right now!
dead or alive she spins my head right round
Not sure about dead or alive... seems an odd choice, I may be missing something.
like a broken record, I want her on repeat
time to clean up and sweep her off her feet
I like this... reminds me of "I wanna be yours" A poem by John Cooper Clarke (although you'll like know it better by the Arctic Monkeys song of the same title which is basically them just singing the poem)