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16 lines, due tomorrow night.
Word. I'm pumped.
Ok so this nigga celph taut wants to battle me
When I'm done he's gonna be stuck on E like a dead battery.
Its sad to see him rap, to me; it sounds like crap.
All his ryhmes are whack, mine; tastey like a big mack.
Spit so fast could cause ya a heart attack, i got that flow from China and back.
Now this rap so dope you could smoke it out a bong
Spit back and forth; call it ping pong.
You prolly look like king Kong, all hairy and shit.
My ryhmes make you mad, make you lit like a candle,
My ryhmes so ill; they hard to handle.
Now you prolly gonna reply to this with some disses.
That's fine, but don't forget to tell the Mrs I had a good time last night.
Your prolly sitting there biting your tounge.
Sitting there thinking "this ain't no fun"
You sitting there wishing you could run from it.
Alright I'm done, now hurry up and reply so I can vomit.
YO, there's plenty wrong wit' you fucking Slave, I can't help you out...
but only thing that ever had a chance to beat Celph? is doubt...
So you're from the moon? Didn't wanna battle you, cousin...
But I'll be sure to lift you off your feet, in case gravity doesn't...
Say "Yes Ma'sah", you broke as fuck at your rapping plan
The only whips he got? come out from the end of his Masters hand!...
Yeah, you had that Cowboy alias, n' you'll have to trend with the label...
ANY girl who dreamt you had a horse? isn't mentally "stable'...
So much shitty posts, with no prowess of dropping yet
I'll do em' like his av', one shot takes this pussy 'off my neck'...
Saw your Spartacus battle, I can't say the shit was astounding...
Since Slave dropped a "free", n' didn't know the first thing about it...
He on some homo shit wit' the lines, he's a desperate chick
That let everyone bang his Saloon doors in, like a Western flick...
So how you thinking you coming like a Slave's a debacle?
The only thing coming at the end of your chain? ...is a shackle..
I have witnessed the elevation of Slave first hand.
That is literally 100% better than 24 hours ago.
Celph, dope as always my dude. You really know how to bring it.
I'm going to cast my vote for the mc I liked better in this battle, because a vote is an opinion
V/ Slave
voted DQed: i need u to explain this just a little more @Spartacus
Slave: liked the opener. Favorite line..
Now you prolly gonna reply to this with some disses. That's fine, but don't forget to tell the Mrs I had a good time last night
Everything else was average. Good multis though
Celph: most every line was on point with the personals
Fav lines were stable and free lines
Vote = Celph
Ok so this nigga celph taut wants to battle me
When I'm done he's gonna be stuck on E like a dead battery.
Weak opener, that was a punch that a 100 year old drunk lady could muster0.5/2
Its sad to see him rap, to me; it sounds like crap.
All his ryhmes are whack, mine; tastey like a big mack.
Horrible man, your concepts are very simple, and don't pack a punch so far0.5/2
Spit so fast could cause ya a heart attack, i got that flow from China and back.
Now this rap so dope you could smoke it out a bong
Your structure is getting all fucked here.. weak concepts still0.5/2
Spit back and forth; call it ping pong.
You prolly look like king Kong, all hairy and shit.
Simple concept no punch0/2
My ryhmes make you mad, make you lit like a candle,
My ryhmes so ill; they hard to handle.
There is no substance to your ideas man, it seems like something a new born baby could come up with0/2
Now you prolly gonna reply to this with some disses.
That's fine, but don't forget to tell the Mrs I had a good time last night.
Little bit better concept, but no punch still you need to word it as to deliver more of an impact, you want him to feel the diss and be like "damn, that hurts a feelin'0.5/2
Your prolly sitting there biting your tounge.
Sitting there thinking "this ain't no fun"
No, just no0/2
You sitting there wishing you could run from it.
Alright I'm done, now hurry up and reply so I can vomit.
Hmm, this is your best line, even though its still really weak...1/2
Slave you get a 3/16.. You need to come up with some wayyy better concepts my man, shit was just unoriginal, didn't have substance, and was way to simple. Check out other battles and shit and get your game up.
YO, there's plenty wrong wit' you fucking Slave, I can't help you out...
but only thing that ever had a chance to beat Celph? is doubt...
Not bad opener, could have been worded better imo1/2
So you're from the moon? Didn't wanna battle you, cousin...
But I'll be sure to lift you off your feet, in case gravity doesn't...
ehh not great0.5/2
Say "Yes Ma'sah", you broke as fuck at your rapping plan
The only whips he got? come out from the end of his Masters hand!...
Ok decent, not overly creative though1/2
Yeah, you had that Cowboy alias, n' you'll have to trend with the label...
ANY girl who dreamt you had a horse? isn't mentally "stable'...
Not a bad wordplay, not super hard hitting though1/2
So much shitty posts, with no prowess of dropping yet
I'll do em' like his av', one shot takes this pussy 'off my neck'...
Not bad1/2
Saw your Spartacus battle, I can't say the shit was astounding...
Since Slave dropped a "free", n' didn't know the first thing about it...
haha best line so far1.5/2
He on some homo shit wit' the lines, he's a desperate chick
That let everyone bang his Saloon doors in, like a Western flick...
hmm decent punch, decent personal too for anyone that knows his alias is cowboy1.5/2
So how you thinking you coming like a Slave's a debacle?
The only thing coming at the end of your chain? ...is a shackle..
Not feeling the set up, punch was kinda played0.5/2
Celph you get a 8/16 Not a great verse but more than enough to take the win. Some of your concepts were a little played, but you had a couple decent bars. Keep up man.
My vote goes to Celph for having harder hitting punches/personals/wordplay and more consistency.
v/Celph Taut
if you guys get a chance could you pop over and give this a vote? Thanks.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...053/index.html
Ok so this nigga celph taut wants to battle me
When I'm done he's gonna be stuck on E like a dead battery.
statement ish
Its sad to see him rap, to me; it sounds like crap.
All his ryhmes are whack, mine; tastey like a big mack.
corny
Spit so fast could cause ya a heart attack, i got that flow from China and back.
Now this rap so dope you could smoke it out a bong
Spit back and forth; call it ping pong.
wheres the punch?
You prolly look like king Kong, all hairy and shit.
My ryhmes make you mad, make you lit like a candle,
My ryhmes so ill; they hard to handle.
nah
Now you prolly gonna reply to this with some disses.
That's fine, but don't forget to tell the Mrs I had a good time last night.
nah
Your prolly sitting there biting your tounge.
Sitting there thinking "this ain't no fun"
nah
You sitting there wishing you could run from it.
Alright I'm done, now hurry up and reply so I can vomit.
lol no
vs
YO, there's plenty wrong wit' you fucking Slave, I can't help you out...
but only thing that ever had a chance to beat Celph? is doubt...
using ur own name as a punch is wack imo
So you're from the moon? Didn't wanna battle you, cousin...
But I'll be sure to lift you off your feet, in case gravity doesn't...
weak
Say "Yes Ma'sah", you broke as fuck at your rapping plan
The only whips he got? come out from the end of his Masters hand!...
works since he changed his name to slave
Yeah, you had that Cowboy alias, n' you'll have to trend with the label...
ANY girl who dreamt you had a horse? isn't mentally "stable'...
straight, couldve been better
So much shitty posts, with no prowess of dropping yet
I'll do em' like his av', one shot takes this pussy 'off my neck'...
weak
Saw your Spartacus battle, I can't say the shit was astounding...
Since Slave dropped a "free", n' didn't know the first thing about it...
bad wording
He on some homo shit wit' the lines, he's a desperate chick
That let everyone bang his Saloon doors in, like a Western flick...
nah
So how you thinking you coming like a Slave's a debacle?
The only thing coming at the end of your chain? ...is a shackle..
weak closer
cowboy just kept making statements and corny jokes..no real punchlines or creativity..celph takes this for obvious reasons
v.. celph
in slaves verse i couldnt find nothing worth quoting..
everything was basic will no creativity or sting,
work on being more direct n harsher with ur concepts..
take more time writing ur lines,
as for celph..he came harsher with his diss..
the punches were more direct n they stood out more as 'disses'..
few jabs thru out ur verse, nothing that stood out as fire,
but def enough to take the win here with ease..
slave read more battles on here n learn to be harder
vote: celph taut
Nothing
vs
So you're from the moon? Didn't wanna battle you, cousin...
But I'll be sure to lift you off your feet, in case gravity doesn't...
I think Celph keyed up something with minimal effort for the won. Slave, work on dissing your opponent with some witty/harsh concepts. Flow is good, structure is alright, now work on some harsh/witty concepts and you'll be straight dude.
MVGT: Celph
celph wins via KO