Lil Nati Kidd

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Born and raised in Avondale
growin up my grandma put me thru hell
daddy stayed locked up in jail
age 14 i had anorexia, skin was turnin pail

mamma went the crazy house for paranoid schizophrenia
age 15 i was diagnosed with depressive mania
friends would run the streets
wasnt scared of shit we was some lil beasts

had much drama in my life
also had many fights
set ppl houses on fire at nights
i suddenly got rapped one day in broad daylight

i had so many life obsticles coulndt neva get over
drunk grandma always and she was neva sober
got beat on when i was 7 and 8
cant go anywhere now but i used to always stay out late

used ta smoke weed wit all my close ppl
used ta drink too, none of us was even close to legal
mama got got out da crazy house, we moved to walnut hills
all u saw was crackheads n niggas givan drug deals

problems wit bitches at my new school
didnt wana be my friend none of them bitches was cool
i killed 1 bitch at the age of ten
when i turned thirteen my real life hell begin

i got pregnant, had an abortion cus dude left out
always cryin thru anything no one to care about
i neva had sympathy for no 1 cus i was ruthless
every fight i got into everybody was cluesless
about how i leave the fight clean but them bitches left toothless

8th grade niggaz didnt wont me
9th and 10th grade niggaz all on me
where was these mothafuckas at when i was heart broken and lonely

the lil Nati kidd is me
this is tru shit cant u see
my life was neva happy, painfully that how shit for me must b

WOW!!! You had a hard life. This was an aight piece, it could've been better. Work on some vocab and try to even out ya lines. It was a lil heart felt. The only other thing I can say is try to put it in order from your youngest age till how old you are now. Then it would've been more like a story. This was aight. Overall 6/10

thank u...

if u need help with elevating PM or hit me up on yahoo or aim. My screen names are in my profile. I think you'd be dope shit.

ok den i'll get at chu.... thanks

You need to post two links, to two OMs you left decent feedback on, or this gets closed, thanks.

im feelin this i can relate to some of it i was shot at the age of nine and me and my homeboy murKed the dude but i love this keep doin what you doin and if nobody else wants to read and listen to what you got to say i will just let me know im out one cuz

i was feeling this shit the flow was dope.
more vocab though

No links. Closed.