Yall Cats Is Weak

Yo lyrics don't impress me, Don't take binoculars to see who tha best be, So test me, if u thinkin Imma deplete, Don't turn ya back cause my flow never sleeps, Gainin respect makin my way to tha top, Everybody waitin for a estimated day to flop, But never that they say when I spit they ear drums start to pound, Only put out a few lines and I'm already tha greatest in tha Underground, Yall some circus clowns, Go head n throw ya weak turf up, Spittin wit a purpose but I didn't mean ta hurt ya,
Mic in my hand boy i do this thang often,
Flow so cold my stu is still defrostin.

this was very weak homie....Add some strucutre to your verses or whatever my dude.

amateur flow

okay so I'm not all that but do you "more experienced" artist have a little advice?

pick a few battles around here you'll get better at punchlines and gain more structure in your flow but every person picks up on skills in different ways just gotta find your own way of learning..best advice i could offer you homie