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10 lines
30 to drop
5 to check
checkity yo step kid im bout to rip yo shit
aight dude come get me then..
check...
Its Evident I Spit Better Shit Then You Could Ever Since
Audio Head? You Only Ill In Noise Like Your Residence
u couldnt CUM up wit a verse even if u jacked off all over dis website
so im a take it out on dis fuckin new b just to get my mind set right
Mothafucka cant deal wit me cuzz im his biggest problem
He goes to clubs full of gays n likes when they be gettin on em
Nicca couldnt rap even if he used' le accents in his rhyme
Only time he get laid is when he gets put to em sleep itz bed time
dont test me little gurl cuz my raps b holdin up heat
if one of my punches hit you bitch yo don't call da Police
he's from California!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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Yo skrip just stick to script..you lose, I win, you walk off with a limp
You can ask my past rivals all my rhymes are like clips
They come fast, hit hard, and leave bitches in fits
Ur bitch want my autograph but my dick is all she gets
My fifth will leave you rolling on the floor like a dave chappelle skit
With it I skeet, then split, set it off then dip
You'd think hes blind the way all his punches miss
Ill fit you in a tiny box like a christmas gift
Lift, and put it under a tree, Ur tombstone says nothing
Because bitch like you don't rest in peace
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this was well... shit, lol at that thoQuote:
Originally Posted by WWJD
nice punch'nt
Nicca couldnt rap even if he used' le accents in his rhyme
Only time he get laid is when he gets put to em sleep itz bed time
definately dont use a line like this, it'll steal ya lime light kids
dont test me little gurl cuz my raps b holdin up heat
if one of my punches hit you bitch yo don't call da Police
defifinately try to make sense when delivering punches
if anything this one actually made him out to be the better person
...........don't call da Police... not snitchin on ya wack ass....
vote- Mr.Scribbles for not havin a verse like this
... and for at least tryna put together somthin
~flipped~comical~and~rugged~
~flipped~
Yo skrip just stick to script
~comical~
dave chappelle
~rugged~
Lift, and put it under a tree
love the work boys...
upppin#1
uppin #1 checkin
if i could i would vote for Skrip
but i cant
but if one of ull honestly vote my battle ill do the same when i can
its at the top of FL
uppin for votes #2 check rofl
naw scribble threw em i can t vote but if i could he'd take it the lines was nice the dave chappelle part was hot and skrip stick 2 the script man be easy youll hit and give feed back on my battles peace
both were shitty. i hated both verses honestly, i dont see potential here at all, but i'm sure that you guys will get shit down. your flows are choppy, structure honestly doesn't matter, so don't try to be so precise all the time, just try and keep punches in 2 bars. i suggest you both to make your setups (first line) relate to your punches (second line). be more creative with concepts (read LLL battles). and just get better altogether. make your wording more direct as well, work on EVERYTHING. keep it up ..
both were meh ..but vote goes to ..
v. Skrip
uppin y0 someones drop some votes n kill da thread like yall did against erryone dat i battled
ok ill drop it like this skrip won definetly scribbles u had no chance with a rap like that sry but i need like 30 more posts nd i can vote so if u could to try to vote in my battle vs. conartest