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check. and why you go to different account rofl
boost up the easy wins? lol *waits for your wack punch about that*
fo' da squad...
we commin for war and thomas'll get dropped at the door
par-tay will never raise his scores, his only AIDS--go underfloor
the old, washed up faggot tay tay is slow n' lame
Even if your prime skills revive its only in your FINAL fantasy game
I'll scream Timmmber cuz you big time gunna fail
bitch the L-S-U the way your wackness makes niggas wanna Yale
you a faggot, iam a Beast ask Santana, Silk and Q
Iam hitler, your Anne Frank how ger-man brutally beats jew
son I always thought you were poor and unwanted shit
you can Cry over my Win...then find a dead league & mod it bitch
...10.
Tim delete those typos^
Why beef homie? your cool as fuck but you be acting like a queer yo
I wanna know whats the deal doe? u just cant wait to play w/ ur dildoe
i can just straight clown yah, theres no way u belong in LLL, jr
cuz back when rb had skill i was in LLL, u were just in LLL jr
theres no escaping the beat down ur wack dog we're not rivals
u can go ahead n pray to god but he wont show like the tourney finals
N i recently lost, but i wont to you cuz your verses are never strong
homie i gotta right my wrongs, while everything your write is wrong
N im a heavy hitter, I be messing with bitches unlike you chink
I drink just vodka n tequila
but in your case...theres pure smhirnoff and soft drinks
Jdoe
I'll scream Timmmber cuz you big time gunna fail
bitch the L-S-U the way your wackness makes niggas wanna Yale
coo line.
son I always thought you were poor and unwanted shit
you can Cry over my Win...then find a dead league & mod it bitch
the only multi in this ENTIRE battle.
Tay
i can just straight clown yah, theres no way u belong in LLL, jr
cuz back when rb had skill i was in LLL, u were just in LLL jr
SICK RYME SCHEmE! nah but for real. did u just ryme jr with jr... wtf...
i dont see any metaphor comes close to something that an 8 year old battler couldnt think of. gogo Dr. Suess on your one word rymes. or in one case...same word ryme..smh... i'm not polling my vote but jdoe's verse is easily better. next time u say my verse has "nothing" u better be on a whole other level. cuz that was prolly one of the worste verses i've seen since i been back.
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cant edit... wtf.
Jdoe
"we commin for war and thomas'll get dropped at the door
par-tay will never raise his scores, his only AIDS--go underfloor"
cool wording. decent meta.
"the old, washed up faggot tay tay is slow n' lame
Even if your prime skills revive its only in your FINAL fantasy game"
if he really plays final fantasy its a dope punch. if not its aiight. meh wording
"I'll scream Timmmber cuz you big time gunna fail
bitch the L-S-U the way your wackness makes niggas wanna Yale"
my favorite out of your lines. cool meta.
"you a faggot, iam a Beast ask Santana, Silk and Q
Iam hitler, your Anne Frank how ger-man brutally beats jew"
setup line is wack, punch is decent.
"son I always thought you were poor and unwanted shit
you can Cry over my Win...then find a dead league & mod it bitch"
good closer.
Tay
"Why beef homie? your cool as fuck but you be acting like a queer yo
I wanna know whats the deal doe? u just cant wait to play w/ ur dildoe"
gay lines are like gun lines, if u make one, gotta make it crazy. this is very simple.
"i can just straight clown yah, theres no way u belong in LLL, jr
cuz back when rb had skill i was in LLL, u were just in LLL jr"
this is a good personal. ryming a word with the same word, is too weak
"theres no escaping the beat down ur wack dog we're not rivals
u can go ahead n pray to god but he wont show like the tourney finals"
your best meta. just add some comma's or suttin, very run-on
"N i recently lost, but i wont to you cuz your verses are never strong
homie i gotta right my wrongs, while everything your write is wrong"
the setup to the punch is good.
"N im a heavy hitter, I be messing with bitches unlike you chink
I drink just vodka n tequila
but in your case...theres pure smhirnoff and soft drinks"
your setup line is lame, weak closer.
there were more decent lines than i acted like. but i'm calm and collective now. good luck to the both of you in the battle.
hey stop free posting fag
Tay
i can just straight clown yah, theres no way u belong in LLL, jr
cuz back when rb had skill i was in LLL, u were just in LLL jr
theres no escaping the beat down ur wack dog we're not rivals
u can go ahead n pray to god but he wont show like the tourney finals
vs
nothing
J Doe that verse was horrible like wtf. Tay was more consistent and its obvious to tell. Vote/ Tay
^^^lmao CREW VOTE!
will a mod please clear this shit up. both votes are invalid.