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This was nice man...
heartfelt shit..
keep postng
Starin at a stranger with a perplexed complextion/
Is it you, or just a new version? 6.0/nice
the first verse was more complex but the second one was deeper
nice one.............SLADIN u could've tried harder to reply..........blah blah inspire the usual vocab flow mulites shit good..........
STOP SLEEPING PEOPLE
^^definetly feelin it inspire,nicely written good vocab,and a good story...liked the hook...the fork in the road line was nice,youll never comphrehend,very nicely written inspire...i liked th esecond verse more,,the first..seemed a bit out,dunno why,amybe the rhyme scheme was different or soethign small i couldnt pick uptrills right..second verse deeper,first complex...mix em both so you have complex deepness...ill..
nicely written i liked it...
bismillah
^^^work in progress... much love for the replies...
Ill piece.........I was loving it.........U came back wit a strong piece........Katie died.........How did she die............?
that was ill, a lil low on tha multis but u dont always need multis to make a god piece,it was def. deep,i wass feelin it,keep spittin,peace kidd
this was very nice, I was feeling it, kinda reminds me of a relationship I had. anyway, this had some great lines, more original than most people's love pieces, and it had hook. I miss hooks, they used to be in every piece, and now maybe 1 in 5 pieces have them. AND the hook fit the piece perfectly.
this kind of reminded me of one of those punk songs about love...take that as a complement, I love punk.
check out my stigmata piece
Peace
Bash you are the stupidest person on RB... serious... SHE DID NOT DIE WHERE THE HELL DID YOU PULL THAT FROM... and im not a femcee dammit...
lol@bash... uppin
You're a emcee i didnt kno dat........Ur name sound like a femcee name and ur avator is a female......My bad dawg...........
hahaha^^Mad funniness mix-up..LMAO..haha Nice piece but Inspire...Came dope on this one...Upppin this one....
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this was hott, and the thread is funny, lol @ you and bash. nahh seriously this was off the hook can u peep my piece called Cream 2003
inspire is a girl....
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typing like him (he's my idol)
dopeneess on this one....
lets collab...im starting audio
soon homie...lets do it....
^^fuck you... lol, i gotta post a pic or something to prove i'm not... did you happen to hear this from kapone? don't listen to him... i mean his homepage is http://www.swallowitall.comQuote:
inspire is a girl....