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Laughing weapon
Laughing weapon
his sibling says
how glad she is
he did good
getting his parent’s
Attention.
her sibling laughs
at her joke
that was funny
and reclaimed her parent’s
Attention.
later in the night
they fight
for a Toy
the oppisote coy
leads to Goodness and Laughter
the Weapons
And they hate each other.
And will kill another
For it.
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Don't think i understand it fully. Maybe i dig too deep. What i thought it was about was humanity fighting for God's attention or something. Like fighting cos of beliefs. Tribal warfare.
A fresh-ish approach to a piece. Seemed to break abruptly in the last stanza. But i can dig that as the effect.